whew..please excuse me for a moment as I compose myself... I really enjoyed this chapter. It was interesting to have the semi-secrecy of Eames' and Arthur's relationship being chipped away slightly as other people observe various elements. I LOVED your depiction of a panic attack- as someone who's had several in the past, it was very interesting to see that experience in a literary light. As always, I also love the car scenes. They seem to be the core of your story, and they really couldn't be better. And, oh, the porn at the end. wow. I like that you chose this method of delivery for the first porn because Arthur is a teenage boy, however restrained he might be, and masturbation is practically a career for most teenage boys. Thanks for this great chapter, and I cannot wait for the next one! Am I correct in thinking we're about halfway there? (p.s. how bummed will I be when this is over? incredibly bummed)
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I really enjoyed this chapter. It was interesting to have the semi-secrecy of Eames' and Arthur's relationship being chipped away slightly as other people observe various elements. I LOVED your depiction of a panic attack- as someone who's had several in the past, it was very interesting to see that experience in a literary light. As always, I also love the car scenes. They seem to be the core of your story, and they really couldn't be better. And, oh, the porn at the end. wow. I like that you chose this method of delivery for the first porn because Arthur is a teenage boy, however restrained he might be, and masturbation is practically a career for most teenage boys. Thanks for this great chapter, and I cannot wait for the next one! Am I correct in thinking we're about halfway there? (p.s. how bummed will I be when this is over? incredibly bummed)